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Hyperfisk Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011  Professional Filmographer
@00:15lso a nice looking animation. I would go in and fix the eyedirection of the guy on the table - it would be nice if he was looking somewhere in general, instead of his eyes just spinning around; I see where you want to go with this though. Also the doctor seems to be on stepped curves some of the time. probably just spacing. Other than that it looks cool, nice laughter on both of them.
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January 2011 11second club entry
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AshytaFang Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
Haha I love his face at the end! A very nice little animation over all! The only think i would tweak is making the doctor's movements look a little less like one fluid movement, have him sway and pause a little bit. But that could just be personal taste, it looks great. I like the little guy getting poked he's interesting haha
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Sam-in-Motion Featured By Owner May 5, 2011
Thank you for the crits :)
When i handed in on 11second club the crits was also towards the doctor, so not just personal taste, a clear problem. But you have managed to pin point what the prob is in more detail, thank you, i will take time and work on him.
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AshytaFang Featured By Owner May 5, 2011
I always feel like I'm being rude giving crits haha so i'm glad it could help a bit, keep up the good work!
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Sam-in-Motion Featured By Owner May 6, 2011
Construstive crits is always needed. Thanks :D
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Hyperfisk Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2011  Professional Filmographer
@00:15lso a nice looking animation. I would go in and fix the eyedirection of the guy on the table - it would be nice if he was looking somewhere in general, instead of his eyes just spinning around; I see where you want to go with this though. Also the doctor seems to be on stepped curves some of the time. probably just spacing. Other than that it looks cool, nice laughter on both of them.
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